1. is this yardman WAN of Tianma Vehicle Company please? Here it should be " that"
2.yeh, who are you please? Here it should be "who is that".
3.yardman Wan, which we preconcerted is 45 seats. Here it should be"what we preconcerted"
4.if it is possible to add a 17seats bus? Here "if" is unwanted and the sentence should be " is it possible to..."
5.people hope together in their trip. This sentence is Chinglish and you can say" People hope they can stay together in their trip"
6.please readjust it as possible. What does " as possible" mean?
7.would you please tell me who is the driver? Here you should say" .....tell me who the driver is?"
8.not sure, just for you reference. Does this sentence show the meaning of "好，我下午再与您联络"?
9.i don't know at that moment, just by readjusting, could you call again in the afternoon? Here "at this moment" is better and " call me again" is better and " just by readjusting" can show the meaning of "等调整过后"?
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导游员与汽车公司调度员的接待联系：
