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帮我改下我的日志. 挑出有误的地方. 求求你们啦..! 大哭
                          Bad day
Today was bad day. Bad weather and bad temper. In this situation, I wanna to did nothing.
During the class,I just looked at the leafage of the trees outside the window. My eyes were filled with green, This feeling was very comfortable just like taking a walk in the forest.
Suddenly I found something about myself,I have  been lacking goal.Thus, my chievement of study had not abtained progress.Day after day,my confidence have suffered large shock.That is a big trouble for me. So, I must search object quickly.
楼主 Date: 2009-07-03 18:30:40
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Today was bad day:It's a bad day today.
I wanna to did nothing.:I don't want to do anything.
Suddenly I found something about myself,I have  been lacking goal.:Suddenly I found something wrong with me,I have  no goal.
I just looked :I've been looking
my chievement of study had not abtained progress:I have not obtained progress in my study so far.
search object quickly.:search for my goal quickly
Date: 2009-07-03 18:59:10
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