主题：[白丁屋]---谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔?---第八期

新手，第一次，来晃晃。。。。

谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔    who can tell me, how to fly
作者:DSY

我想,展翅飞翔    I want to, fly in the sky,

却不知飞往何方   but do not know the aim
谁能告诉我---未来的方向  who can tell me---the future's  way
我心迷茫   my heart is confused

放飞心醉的阳光  let the ravishing sunshine
携着我一起飞扬  take me fly together
跨过茫茫群山  over every mountains
走过漫漫长路   and cross every long roads

暮色四合 clouds get together
遮住了阳光  estop the sunshine
掩盖了方向 cover up the direction
我---如何飞翔,飞往何方   so I---how to fly, fly to where

夜风习习  winds blow and blow
脚步踉跄 footfall stagger and stagger
看不见,月光飘荡的脚步 no sight of the moon's windy step,
看不清,未来的方向     low sight of the future's direction
谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔   who can tell me, how to fly

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谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔 who can tell me how to fly
作者:DSY written by  DSY

我想,展翅飞翔 I want to spread the wings into the sky

却不知飞往何方 but I can not get the way
谁能告诉我---未来的方向 who can tell me –about the future
我心迷茫   I was all at see

放飞心醉的阳光 set out the charming sunshine
携着我一起飞扬 holding my hands and fly
跨过茫茫群山 stridden over the boundless mountains
走过漫漫长路   and went across the endless roads

暮色四合  the dusk is approaching
遮住了阳光 shut out the sunshine
掩盖了方向 covered up the direction
我---如何飞翔,飞往何方   how can I fly ,where should I fly to

夜风习习 night winds blows gently
脚步踉跄 I tottered on the road
看不见,月光飘荡的脚步 can not see the moonlight
看不清,未来的方向 can not get the future direction
谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔 who can tell me, how to fly

我又来了～！我的脸被炸伤了．真可怜．差点毁容～请假回家才上了网　呵呵～！

DD, 你真是好学哦.
我喜欢这个名字,因为这里有太多的"白痴"总是在付出,
然而收获在什么地方,.....................

DD,小心点哦.

who can indicate me how to fly


I want to stretch my wings to fly
But where's my direction bothers me
Who can tell me---the future
I obsessessed

   Let the enchanting sunlight out
   Fly with me
   surmount the endless mountains
   Pass the boundless path

sunlight enshrouded by the
Convereged twilight
Keep the direction in dark      
How can i fly, where am i head for


  Even Wind at night blow gentlely
  Feet still waggered
Hovering footprint of moon are out of my sight.
No future direction as far as i can see
Who can tell me how to fly?

how to fly ,who can tell me

     i want to spread my winds to fly
     but i don't know where to fly
     who can tell me the future ways
     my heart is very  coming down
  
     let the beautiful sunshine to fly freely
     also take me
     fly  over  many moutains
     and walk  by  the endless ways
  
     the evening  come down
     shut out the sunshine
     cover up the ways
     so i....how to fly ,where to  fly
   
     the evening breeze  blows
     footsteps  staggers
     i can't see the lighted  trace of moon
     can't see the exactly  the future direction
     who can tell me ,how to fly



   绝对的菜鸟,第一次翻译.   看了,可不许笑.有意见随便提.
     
  

谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔 Show me how to fly
作者:DSY  By DSY

我想,展翅飞翔 I flutter my wings,
             with an urge to fly.
却不知飞往何方 But I don't know the way,
             out there in the sky.
谁能告诉我---未来的方向 Show me the road to future,
                     far and high
我心迷茫    I've lost my mind,
           about what is right.

放飞心醉的阳光 Let go the dazzling sunshine,
携着我一起飞扬 Take me in your fly.
跨过茫茫群山 We travel across mountains and roads,
走过漫漫长路 side by side.


暮色四合   The darkness closes in,
遮住了阳光 blocking my sunshine.
掩盖了方向 Losing my way ahead,
我---如何飞翔,飞往何方   How can I fly,and where can I fly?

夜风习习 The night wind blows high,
脚步踉跄 and I stagger by.
看不见,月光飘荡的脚步 Can't see the drifting moonlight,
看不清,未来的方向 Can't make out the way to the future,
                far and high.
谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔Who would show me how to fly?

Show me how to fly
By DSY

I flutter my winds,
with an urge to fly.
But I don't know the way,
out there in the sky.
Show me the road to future,
far and high.
I've lost my mind,
about what is right.
   
Let go the dazzling sunshine,
Take me in your fly.
We travel across mountains and roads,
side by side.   

The darkness closes in,
blocking my sunshine.
Losing my way ahead,
How can I fly, and where to fly?

The night wind blows high,
and I stagger by.
Can't see the drifting moonlight,
can't make out the way to future,
far and high.
Who would show me how to fly?

可以尝试翻译哦~

谁没有第一次呢...

参与就好~

To: sarah JJ

   JJ, 我只是好问而已哦~

   每个人对“收获”... 的感觉不一样吧？

    举个例子吧，一些著名人物在过世后他们/她们的才能和思想才得到后人的认可，可在他们/她们的有身之年~不断坚持的付出~ 但最终收获了什么呢...

    希望JJ 能理解 DD “幼稚”的想法哦~

多多参与， 多多“收获”哦~

永远支持!!!

最后由 luck angel 于 2006-09-06 08:32 编辑

嘻嘻，我也是第一次发翻译帖。
心想，肯定有许多不好的地方。大家不要介意，尽情地、犀利地指出我的错误。让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧！

我想,展翅飞翔
I want spread the wings,and fly.

却不知飞往何方
But I have no idea,where to go.

谁能告诉我---未来的方向
Who can tell me——the way of the future?

我心迷茫   
I'm in a mess.


放飞心醉的阳光
Let the charm sunlight go

携着我一起飞扬
with me

跨过茫茫群山
Climb over the mountains.

走过漫漫长路   
Pass the long roads.


暮色四合
Dark cover

遮住了阳光
and shade the sunlight.

掩盖了方向
Make me lost.

我---如何飞翔,飞往何方   
I,how to fly? where to fly?


夜风习习
Breese in night.

脚步踉跄
Stagger on foot.

看不见,月光飘荡的脚步
Do not see the change of moon.

看不清,未来的方向
Do not see the way of the future.

谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔
Who can tell me how to fly?


最后由 云深人家 于 2006-09-06 10:13 编辑

不好意思！！我的水平很有限！只能支持一下白丁屋！！我也正在努力学习！

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谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔            Can one show me, how to fly?

我想,展翅飞翔                   I wish, I can fly beyond bound
却不知飞往何方                  but the way where to be found
谁能告诉我---未来的方向         can one show me, the future await
我心迷茫                        to stop my mind lingering around

放飞心醉的阳光                  Let the soul-warming sunshine
携着我一起飞扬                  embracing me to the skyline
跨过茫茫群山                    come across endless mountain
走过漫漫长路                    and paths with leaps and bounds

暮色四合                        But when the dark fell down
遮住了阳光                      overshadowed the light of Sun
掩盖了方向                      my way is lost in sight at all
我---如何飞翔,飞往何方         where and how should I fly on and on

夜风习习                        
脚步踉跄                        Walking tottery in night wind
看不见,月光飘荡的脚步           seeing no moonlight dimming and
                            brightening
看不清,未来的方向               and my destiny stand out of sight
谁能告诉我,怎样飞翔             can one show me, how to fly?