主题：[白丁屋求翻译]第42期--- 爱情标点符号 　点击：3262 回复：100

呵呵~~~~沙发咧

Meet for the first time
Tacit understanding,such as best friend,
Don't need to open mouth
The worry also understands
Your look in the eyes would talk ……?
Abridge a question mark
The colon says before:
Brackets(you know)
You the side of the sweet mouth Cape,
Raising a pair stirs number,
Feel deeply about your beauty!
Grind to a stop my heart palpitates,
The derivation"three words"
The ～ conjunction walks to old
Loving each other can't divide;
All throw away the partitions
----Unexpected obstacles person's way out
The companion is to emphasize number
The common table writes love collection of poems
The book title calls 《fine 》
The love of my a pair
Sweet and airtight
The turn settled 1
Perfect period.
（Is a per so）

就因为电脑问题。。。就坐地板了。。。

上一期的是有难度。。。浪费了我好多脑细胞。。结果翻译出来的还是不满意。。。

请问:专家分是怎么得的?还有怎么送别人积分?

I am not good at poem,  expecting for your answers.

爱情标点符号
Punctuation Marks of Love

          第一次相见
　　就默契如至交
不需要开口
　　心事也明了
At first sight,
we are as close as confidants.
Without any words,
we know each other's  hearts.


最后由 溟生 于 2008-03-19 21:18:11编辑

水平有限，只能挺挺了~
支持支持！

你眼神会说话……？
　　省略个问号
冒号前面说：
括号（你知道）
Can ur eyes speak?
Omitted is a question mark.
Before the colon I said:
Brackets ( U knew it )
最后由 溟生 于 2008-03-19 21:54:39编辑

爱情标点符号


I think is ??????

only go throught can catch it.

你甜甜嘴角旁，
　　扬起俩逗号，
感叹你美丽！
　　停顿我心跳、
Round your sweet lips,
a two-comma smile blooms.
Exclamatory is your elegance!
For that my heartbeat pauses.

引出“三个字”
　　～连接走到老
相爱不能分；
　　把间隔都去掉
Quoting"the very three words"
~We are connected to grow old in bliss
Sticking to each other,
we erase the separation dot.

——波折人生路
　　伴侣是着重号
共同谱写爱情诗集
　　书名叫《美好》
---Life is full of ups and downs
    Soulmates are mark of emphasis,
    jointly composing a love poetic works,
    the title of which is Happiness.   
   
   
   

我俩的爱情
　　甜甜密密
　　圈定了一个
　　完美的句号。
Our love,
sweet as honey,
has already circled
a perfect full stop.