本版推荐:
 
等 级:版主
积 分:27211分
专家分:3149分

主题::【酸奶开坦克杯】白丁屋翻译擂台——《花寞烟殇》翻译集萃

点击:1308   |   回复:41   |   标签:   
贝提娜的微笑

男子斜斜的倚靠于墙上.

指间夹着的烟.

宛若悬崖裂缝之中兀自独立的花.

with a cigarette clamping between his fingers, the guy leaning against the wall looks like an independent flower bursting from a cliff crack

冥冥之中的注定.

于万千的浩瀚人海之中,于无涯的时间荒野里,
她和他在同一天租屋.
她和他在同一天搬家.

她住他的隔壁.
他是她的邻居.

没有早一步,也没有晚一步,
女子和男子站在了宿命纠结的掌心.
It is destiny that among the thousands of people  the two of them  moved to their new houses at the same day and became neighbors without delay. The woman and the man were put into the center of the their intertwining destiny.

女子觉察到隔壁男子的妻子挽着和她相同的提包.

男子发现了邻家女子的丈夫系着和他一样的领带.

同一刻,他们醒悟到幸福的破裂,配偶的背叛.The woman noticed that the man's wife had the same handbag with her, so did the man found the woman's husband had a same tie as his. Suddenly at the same time, they both recognized the crack of the happiness and the betrayal of their spouses

鱼儿鱼儿游啊游

夜如醇酒的芬芳,


浓郁得化解不开.


The night,


Enriched with fragrances of mellow wine,


dark and indescribable.


墙在时光的抚摩之下,


烙上了苍颓的印记.


Branded with decadence is the wall by the Old Gypsy.


男子斜斜的倚靠于墙上.


指间夹着的烟.


Leaning on the wall is a man


With cigarettes his fingers in between.


宛若悬崖裂缝之中兀自独立的花.


朵朵烟圈在空中袅袅的盛开,缓缓的漫漶,寂寂的颓败.


Like flowers from cliff cracks standing still


Blossoming in the air,


then fading yet gently, gently and lonely.




backtomars

花  寞  烟  殇

The Lonely Flower and the Dying Smoke

文/  溟生

                                         by M.S.

夜如醇酒的芬芳,

The night is like the scent of the seasoned wine,

浓郁得化解不开.

it weighed down in the air, inextricable.

墙在时光的抚摩之下,

The wall, under the tender touch of time,

烙上了苍颓的印记.

was branded with a dark decadent mark.

男子斜斜的倚靠于墙上.

The man leaned himself against the wall.

指间夹着的烟.

The smoke nipped between his fingers,

宛若悬崖裂缝之中兀自独立的花.

was just like a flower in the cleft of the cliff, isolatedly blooming.

朵朵烟圈在空中袅袅的盛开,缓缓的漫漶,寂寂的颓败.

Smoke rings rose and curled up into the air, slowly getting indistincted and silently declining .

女子着一袭无袖的旗袍,

The lady was in a sleeveless cheong-sam,

冰肌雪肤寸寸裸露在夜的胸腔之内.

the snowlike skin was bare in the bosom of night.

嫩剥葱的手指纤纤的挽着饭盒.

Her fine fingers delicately carrying a lunchbox,

婀娜的,从小巷的深处,她走来,步步莲花,摇曳生姿.

gracefully, from the deep of the lane, she walked up, each pace was like a lotus, beautifully waving in the wind.

冥冥之中的注定.

It was their destiny,

于万千的浩瀚人海之中,于无涯的时间荒野里,

among the millions of peoples, during the unlimited time wilderness,

她和他在同一天租屋.

for her and him to rent the apartment on the same day,

她和他在同一天搬家.

and again move into the house on the same day.

她住他的隔壁.

She lived next to him.

他是她的邻居.

He was her neighbour.

没有早一步,也没有晚一步,

Neither ealier nor later,

女子和男子站在了宿命纠结的掌心.

The lady and the man stood in the hand of the tangled fates.

罗敷有夫.

She already has a husband,

使君有妇.

while he was also married.

原本都是金童玉女包裹在童话般的幸福之中.

At first they were all lived  happily as the blessed boys and girls in the fairy tales.

然而,童话是如斯脆弱的东西.

However, the fairy tales are so fragile,

仿佛飞扬在我们少年天空的纸飞机,

just as the paper plane flying above in our childish sky,

风一吹,就陨落.

that it may fall down with a blow of wind,

雨一打,就溃烂.

and may decay by a falling of rain,

火一烧,就成灰.

and may become ashes by a burn of fire.

女子觉察到隔壁男子的妻子挽着和她相同的提包.

The lady noticed that the wife of her neighbour was carrying the same style of handbag,

男子发现了邻家女子的丈夫系着和他一样的领带.

and the man found that the neighbouring lady's husband was wearing the same design of necktie.

同一刻,他们醒悟到幸福的破裂,配偶的背叛.

In the meanwhile, they realized the break of their happiness and the betrayal of their mates.

一个人的寂寞总是漏洞百出.

In one's loneliness, life is always full of drawbacks.

女子觉察到男子喜欢斜倚在颓圮的墙上吞吐出一圈圈幽蓝的云雾.

The lady came to know that the man liked to lean against the decaying wall, blowing curls of clouds in melancholy blue.

男子发现了女子喜欢提着买来的饺子从悠悠小巷的深处款款行经.

The man found that the lady was used to gracefully walk through the deep of the small lane, carrying  the bought dumplings.

倏忽之间.

At a moment,

男子看到女子如花的寂寞.

the man saw the lady's flowerlike loneliness.

女子瞥见男子若烟的黯殇.

And the lady saw the man's smokelike gloominess.

他们开始交往.

Thus they started their association.

想象她的另一半是怎样相好了他的另一半.

Imagining how her husband was on intimate terms with her wife.

流水长东.时间长逝.

As water always flows eastwards, time flies by.

他们渐渐的忘却了背叛的伤口.

They gradually forgot their wound of being betrayed.

暧昧微妙的情丝,不知不觉在彼此的心间细细密密的织成了一张天罗地网.

Ambiguous and subtle affection, had knitted a gigantic net in between their hearts unconsciously.

他们被困情网中.

They are enmeshed with the net of love.

原谅彼此都是软弱而内敛的人,

Forgiving that each of them was flabby and restrained,

注定举不起坚强的刀刃

which doomed them not to be strong enough to hold up the sharp knife,

斩除通往幸福之路沿途丛生的荆棘.

to chop their way of happiness out along the brambly path of life.

男子对女子说,

The man said to the lady,

如果我有两章船票,你愿和我一起走么.

If I had two steamer tickets, would you go with me?

女子,柔弱的女子,迟疑的女子,

The lady, slender and hesitant,

终于还是停留在原地.

eventually did stay where she was,

纵然内心微弱的声音已经应允了男子的请求.

although in her deep heart a slight voice had already accepted his appeal.

男子,深沉的男子,内敛的男子,

The man, deep and withdrawn,

终于还是黯然神伤,抽身离去.

finally was depressed and got away.

花,仍旧寂寞着她的寂寞.

The flower, was still in her loneliness.

烟,依然黯殇着他的黯殇.

The smoke, was still on his grief.

就这样

Thus,

尘埃落定.

all the dust was back to the ground.

一切归零.

Everything returned to its original state.


最后由 溟生 于 2008-06-23 14:48:39编辑
心生双翼,宁静致远。岁月静好,你我同歌。
楼主 Date: 2008-06-22 11:46:50
运动细胞

花  寞  烟  殇

forsaken flower and mopish smoke

(author: mingsheng)

夜如醇酒的芬芳,

浓郁得化解不开.

墙在时光的抚摩之下,

烙上了苍颓的印记

Night , like the scent of wine,

rendered full-bodied misty but cannot be dissolved out.

Wall , was charactered decadent  tag  lining  with the time`s baptism.

A mankind,  leaned against the wall,

with a cigarette stick between  finger tips.

as it were  flower  in cliff crevices--lonely .

wreaths of smoke were  in full blossom and spiraled upward  in the sky,scattered  slowly and faded away quitely.

A fem ,wore sleevesless cheong-sam,

with her  brilliant sparkle  ice  skin exposured to the thorax of night.

and  toted  canteen with her delicate and slim fingers,

coming  from the deep of alleyway,   coquettish and sway exquisitely like lotus.

冥冥之中的注定.

于万千的浩瀚人海之中,于无涯的时间荒野里,

她和他在同一天租屋.

她和他在同一天搬家.

她住他的隔壁.

他是她的邻居.

没有早一步,也没有晚一步,

女子和男子站在了宿命纠结的掌心.

罗敷有夫.

使君有妇.

they were fate to meet

in the immensity of  myriad  and the infinite moor of  time,

she and he rent house on  the same day,

and moved simultaneously.

she lived next doors to him.

and he was her neighboor.

neither  early , nor  late ,

they  got into  the palm with  foreordination interlaced .

but she has husband.

and he has wife.

原本都是金童玉女包裹在童话般的幸福之中.

然而,童话是如斯脆弱的东西.

仿佛飞扬在我们少年天空的纸飞机,

风一吹,就陨落.

雨一打,就溃烂.

火一烧,就成灰.

女子觉察到隔壁男子的妻子挽着和她相同的提包.

男子发现了邻家女子的丈夫系着和他一样的领带.

同一刻,他们醒悟到幸福的破裂,配偶的背叛.

they were virgins circumfused with happiness in fairy tale.

however,fairy tale was so flimsy,

seemed  like the  paper plane flying leisurely in our young sky,

shattered to pieces under blowing,

cankered by rain droping,

and burn to ashes on fire.

she has sense in mind that his wife  carrying the same handbag as hers ,

and he has  awared that her husband wore the same style of tie .

At the same time ,they have come to themselves and awared the broken blessedness and spouse betrayal.

一个人的寂寞总是漏洞百出.

女子觉察到男子喜欢斜倚在颓圮的墙上吞吐出一圈圈幽蓝的云雾.

男子发现了女子喜欢提着买来的饺子从悠悠小巷的深处款款行经.

倏忽之间.

男子看到女子如花的寂寞.

女子瞥见男子若烟的黯

他们开始交往.

想象她的另一半是怎样相好了他的另一半.

流水长东.时间长逝.

他们渐渐的忘却了背叛的伤口.

暧昧微妙的情丝,不知不觉在彼此的心间细细密密的织成了一张天罗地网.

他们被困情网中.

原谅彼此都是软弱而内敛的人,

注定举不起坚强的刀刃

斩除通往幸福之路沿途丛生的荆棘.

One person`s loneliness was always indefensible.

She felt that he enjoy  leaning against the decadent wall and  spitted out wreaths of smoke in dark blue .

He found that she like jogtroting in the deep of alleyway with dumplings she brought .

Swiftly,he saw through her solitude of flowery .

She caught sight of his gloomy desolation just as smoke.

So they started  to conjecture ,

imaged  how did her other part  love his .

  The time  went  on.

They forgot by degree the treacherous hurt.

This amphibolous and  delicate affection ,like filament,formed  a  web in their heart unconsciously.

They were trapped in it.

Forgave each other  ,so weak and restrained.

It`s destine not to hold strong blade

to clear the thick thorns on the way to happiness.

男子对女子说,

如果我有两章船票,你愿和我一起走么.

女子,柔弱的女子,迟疑的女子,

终于还是停留在原地.

纵然内心微弱的声音已经应允了男子的请求.

男子,深沉的男子,内敛的男子,

终于还是黯然神伤,抽身离去.

花,仍旧寂寞着她的寂寞.

烟,依然黯殇着他的黯殇.

就这样

尘埃落定.

一切归零

He said to her,

would you like to go with me if i got two tickets.

The fem,effeminate and hesitant.

Finally,standing there.

Obviously the feeble voice in her mind has consent to his petition.

The man, deep and restrained,

fulled of depressed  and  get away in the end .

Flower,still line with her quiteness.

Smoke,still enwind his gloomy desolation.

Just that,

the dust has settled.

                                                       Nothing in the end.
沙发 Date: 2008-06-22 11:49:07
烛影清摇
Night, fragrant like ripe wine,
too dense to disolve
Wall, under the smoothing of time
Marked a decadent print

A man, leaned on the wall
A cigarette between his fingers
Seemed like a still dependent flower in the crack of a cliff
Round and round wreath curled upwards into blossom
Slowly spread, lonely decadent
A woman, in the wrap of a cheong-sam with no sleeves
Ice skin naked in the thorax of night
Dedicate and slight fingers, just like inside of an union
Coiled up a canteen
Walked from the dark side of a alleyway,
Elegantly and gorgeously
It seemed deemed to meet,
Among the crowd of thousands of people
Among the unlimited field of time
She, and he rented the house at the same day
She, and he moved at the same day
She lived a distance of one wall,
He was her neighbor.
Not earlier one step, not later one step,
The woman and man stood the crossed center of the fate palm
But each other had their other part
Both of them were married
Used to be happy like beautiful prince and princess in the fairy tale
But, tale was so fragile
Like the paper plane flying in the sky as we were young
Wind blew, it fell
Rain dropped, it rotted
Fire burned, it became ashes

The woman sensed the neighbor’s wife draw the same bag as hers
The man found the woman’s husband wore the same tie as his
At the same moment
They awaken to the crack of happiness, the betrayal of their spouse

One’s lonely always appeared many mistakes
The woman sensed the man loved leaning on the wall and smoked out round and round deep blue wreath
The man found the woman loved drawing bought dumplings and walking from remote side of alleyway
Suddenly
The man viewed her loneliness, seemed like flower
The woman caught a glimpse of his sadness, just like the wreath
They dated each other
Imagined her husband how to lure his wife
River flew, time past
Little by little, they forgot the hurt of betrayal
Vague and delicate love, waved into a big web among the two hearts
Slender and dense
They trapped in the love web
Both of them were weak and internal
They couldn’t hold the strong knives
To cut down the thorn in their pursuit happiness way

Man said to woman
If I had two steamer tickets, will you go with me
The woman, effeminate and hesitate
Stayed at the same place at last
Though actually her weak voice in her heart had consented to his plead
The man, deep and inside
Finally turned around and left depressed

Flowers, felt her lonely still
Smoke, felt his sadness
Just like that
Dust was dust
Everything backed to zero


最后由 溟生 于 2008-06-22 11:53:42编辑
板凳 Date: 2008-06-22 11:50:24
blackoutLonely flowers, blue smoke.
The night
just like the fragrance of mellow wine.
which is too full-bodied to melt away,
Shining the wall which was chiseled pale mark.

The man with cigarette between his two fingers
leans the wall.

As if a flower still standing among the
crack of cliff alone.
Many wisps of smoke curl upwards,
and go up to the boundless sky.(so difficult,late on come back to go on)

The woman wore a cheogsam without sleeveless,whose snow-white ,smooth skin is all exposed at nightfall.
To hold canteen with finespun,and tenderhands hands.
She walked like lotusflower with swinging her slim body from deep the off-street .
It is destined to be among multiludes of huge-crowd,and at infinite ,doletul times.
She and he rent house on the same day,
She and he moved on the same day.
She lived in his next door,
He was her neighbor.
Neither early nor late.
The woman and the man standed on the crossing of destiny at the same time.
The woman who had husband
and the man who also had wife.
The  princess and prince in original fairy tale all lived happily a lot.
However,fairy tale is so frailish.
It just as paper plane flying in the shy at our juvenile period.
To blow it as soon as fell down
To drench it as soon as broke,
To burn it as soon as became ashes
The woman found her neighbor's wife had the same  handbag as hers.
The man also noticed his neighbor's husband wore the same tie as his.
At the same moment,they realized each other's spouse had become defectors,
and happiness had been broken.
A lonely person is all lost his mind and  very silly.
The woman found the man like leaning the ruined wall to blow wisps of  blue smoke.
The man also noticed the woman like holding the dumpling she bought
that jogtroted through the deep off-street .
During trance state,
man found the woman so lonely.
A woman also glanced at a man like mist sadness.
They began to have an affair .
And imagined how her husband loved his wife.
The running water towand east,how time flies.
They gradually forgot treacherous sadness.
Amphibolous and subtile love in their mind was plaited a tight encirclement by.

They are stranded by net of love.
To forgive such flabby and restrained each other.
It is destined not to lift strong knife to cut down thorn on the way to happiness.
"If I had two tickets ship,you would go with me?",the man asked the woman.
Woman,effeminate and hesitant woman.
Finally,she still stayed orginal place.em17.gif
Even if she had concented his desire in her heart.
Man,thoughtful and inner man.
Finally,he got away sadly.
Flower,still lonely like lonesome flower,
Smoke,still wan likne matted smoke.
In this way,the story was over,
Everything returned to by origin.
最后由 溟生 于 2008-06-22 12:06:21编辑
4 Date: 2008-06-22 11:51:28
ina200x  

花寞烟殇

Lonely flower, melancholy smoke

/  溟生

夜如醇酒的芬芳,

Night

As the strong scent of vintage wine

浓郁得化解不开.

Is seldom spread out

墙在时光的抚摩之下,

Wall

Under the caressing of time

烙上了苍颓的印记.

Is branded with vicissitudes

男子斜斜的倚靠于墙上.

The man

Leaning on the wall

指间夹着的烟.

With lighted-cigarette

宛若悬崖裂缝之中兀自独立的花.

As the isolated flower bursting through the cracks of cliff

朵朵烟圈在空中袅袅的盛开,缓缓的漫漶,寂寂的颓败.

The wreaths of smoke enlarge in the air, slowly, lonely

女子着一袭无袖的旗袍,

The woman, in sleeveless cheongsam

冰肌雪肤寸寸裸露在夜的胸腔之内.

With white-radiant skin exposed in the lap of night

嫩剥葱的手指纤纤的挽着饭盒.

Delicate and slender fingers hold the canteen

婀娜的,从小巷的深处,她走来,步步莲花,摇曳生姿.

Walking from the lane gracefully, as the lotus waving

冥冥之中的注定.

Predestinated in the unseen world

于万千的浩瀚人海之中,于无涯的时间荒野里,

In the magnitude of population, at the world of endless time

她和他在同一天租屋.

She and he rented at the same day

她和他在同一天搬家.

She and he moved at the same day

她住他的隔壁.

She lived next his door

他是她的邻居.

He was her neighbor

没有早一步,也没有晚一步,

No earliness, no lateness

女子和男子站在了宿命纠结的掌心.

The woman and the man standing together

At the palm of entangled fatality

罗敷有夫.

A married woman

使君有妇.

A married man

原本都是金童玉女包裹在童话般的幸福之中.

Were supposed to be boy and girl attendants of fairies

然而,童话是如斯脆弱的东西.

However, fragile fairy tale

仿佛飞扬在我们少年天空的纸飞机,

As the paper planes flying in our sky of youth

风一吹,就陨落.

Falling when the wind blows

雨一打,就溃烂.

Rotting when the rain falls

火一烧,就成灰.

Becoming ashes when the fire burns

女子觉察到隔壁男子的妻子挽着和她相同的提包.

The wife of the man next door carrying the same handbag as hers, the woman notices

男子发现了邻家女子的丈夫系着和他一样的领带.

The husband of the woman near wearing the same tie as his, the man finds

同一刻,他们醒悟到幸福的破裂,配偶的背叛.

At the same time, the breach of happiness, the betray of marriage, they both realized

一个人的寂寞总是漏洞百出.

One person’s loneliness, always indefensible

女子觉察到男子喜欢斜倚在颓圮的墙上吞吐出一圈圈幽蓝的云雾.

The woman aware, the man enjoys leaning on the decadent wall puffing wreaths of smoke in light blue

男子发现了女子喜欢提着买来的饺子从悠悠小巷的深处款款行经.

The man finds, the woman likes walking through the long lane with dumplings in hand

倏忽之间.

In a flash

男子看到女子如花的寂寞.

Lonely as flowers in the woman, the man saw

女子瞥见男子若烟的黯殇.

Melancholy as the smoke in the man, the woman caught

他们开始交往.

They started their relationship

想象她的另一半是怎样相好了他的另一半.

With the imagination of their lovers’ betray

流水长东.时间长逝.

Time past by eternally

他们渐渐的忘却了背叛的伤口.

They left their wounds behind

暧昧微妙的情丝,不知不觉在彼此的心间细细密密的织成了一张天罗地网.

Delicate affections, like threads, knitting a thick dragnet in each other’s heart

他们被困情网中.

They both were trapped

原谅彼此都是软弱而内敛的人,

Forgive about their weakness and introversion

注定举不起坚强的刀刃

Doomed to left the knife of adamancy on ground

斩除通往幸福之路沿途丛生的荆棘

Which able to chop the thorns on the way to happiness of life

男子对女子说,

The man whispered to the woman

如果我有两章船票,你愿和我一起走么.

If I got two boat tickets, would you go with me

女子,柔弱的女子,迟疑的女子,

The woman, feminine,hesitant

终于还是停留在原地.

Still stay at the original place at the end

纵然内心微弱的声音已经应允了男子的请求.

Though she accepted his request in her inner heart with her feeble voice

男子,深沉的男子,内敛的男子,

The man, deep, clam

终于还是黯然神伤,抽身离去.

Get way and leave with grief at the end

花,仍旧寂寞着她的寂寞.

The flower, remain beautiful as her loneliness

烟,依然黯殇着他的黯殇.

The smoke, still enlarges as his gloom

就这样

That is

尘埃落定.

It comes to the end

一切归零.

All finished



最后由 溟生 于 2008-06-22 12:11:08编辑
5 Date: 2008-06-22 11:52:56
haihai294067

夜如醇酒的芬芳,the deep night wears a perfume ,fragrant as a ripe wine,

浓郁得化解不开.which can not be easily ripped off.

墙在时光的抚摩之下,even the wall left the marks of time

as it elapses by

烙上了苍颓的印记.

男子斜斜的倚靠于墙上.the man leans upon the wall ,

指间夹着的烟.with a lighting cigarette between his fingers

宛若悬崖裂缝之中兀自独立的花.which quite resembles an only flower who blossoms bravely from a crack of a precipice.

朵朵烟圈在空中袅袅的盛开,缓缓的漫漶,寂寂的颓败.blocks of the smoke climb slowly upwards,grow up ,then fade away

女子着一袭无袖的旗袍,the woman is dressed in a sleeveless long-gown

冰肌雪肤寸寸裸露在夜的胸腔之内.with her snow-white skin  becoming more seducing against the gloomy night

嫩剥葱的手指纤纤的挽着饭盒.holding a lunch-box in her slim and tender fingers,from the deep alley,

here she comes,

婀娜的,从小巷的深处,她走来,步步莲花,摇曳生姿.

冥冥之中的注定.from her every single step illuminates  elegance,

于万千的浩瀚人海之中,于无涯的时间荒野里,it seems it is their doomed destiny that in the very same day they both move and rent another house,

in  the crowds of thousands ,the plaine without bounds.

她和他在同一天租屋.

她和他在同一天搬家and coincidently .

她住他的隔壁.she lives next door and he becomes her neighbour

他是她的邻居.

没有早一步,也没有晚一步,neither earlier,nor later.

女子和男子站在了宿命纠结的掌心.the fate holds both of them, tight.

罗敷有夫.just as in the poem, luofu has her husband,

使君有妇.shiju has his wife.

原本都是金童玉女包裹在童话般的幸福之中.all couples should have lived in happiness which only in a fairy tale can one see

然而,童话是如斯脆弱的东西.but the fairy tale is as fragile as an airplane folded from paper which freely flied in the sky  of our time

仿佛飞扬在我们少年天空的纸飞机,

风一吹,就陨落.it would fall when winds blew, rot away at  raindrops, become ash when on fire.

雨一打,就溃烂.

火一烧,就成灰.

女子觉察到隔壁男子的妻子挽着和她相同的提包.the woman noticed that the wife nextdoor carried "her" bag

男子发现了邻家女子的丈夫系着和他一样的领带.the man found that the neighbour husband wore "his" tie

同一刻,他们醒悟到幸福的破裂,配偶的背叛at the very same moment,

they both felt the fake happiness,the betrayl from their spouse

一个人的寂寞总是漏洞百出.a lot goes wrong in a lonely man's loneliness

女子觉察到男子喜欢斜倚在颓圮的墙上吞吐出一圈圈幽蓝的云雾.the woman notices that the man loves to fume circles of smokes leaning to the dainted wall

男子发现了女子喜欢提着买来的饺子从悠悠小巷 的深处款款行经.the man finds that the woman loves to come back carrying bought dumpling in graceful steps from the deep end of the alley.

倏忽之间.in a sudden

男子看到女子如花的寂寞.the man sees flower-like loneliness

女子瞥见男子若烟的黯殇.the woman peeps the man's gloominess resembling smoke

他们开始交往.then they start seeing eacher other

想象她的另一半是怎样相好了他的另一半.imagine how well she matches him

流水长东.时间长逝.as time goes by

他们渐渐的忘却了背叛的伤口.gradually they both forget about their own betrayal

暧昧微妙的情丝,不知不觉在彼此的心间细细密密的织成了一张天罗地网.and insensibly they have kelt the love thread into a close net for the heart of one another

他们被困情网中.,in which they are kept as prisoners for each other

原谅彼此都是软弱而内敛的人,so please forgive those who are indecisive and introverted that they are doomed to not be able to hold up the blade for cutting thorns on the road leading to happiness

注定举不起坚强的刀刃

斩除通往幸福之路沿途丛生的荆棘.


男子对女子说,the man said to the woman:

如果我有两章船票,你愿和我一起走么.are you going with me if i have two tickets

女子,柔弱的女子,迟疑的女子,the woman, gentle and douteful,

终于还是停留在原地.stayed where she was.

纵然内心微弱的声音已经应允了男子的请求.although her voice feeble inside had already permitted his request

男子,深沉的男子,内敛的男子,the man, thoughful and introverted,

终于还是黯然神伤,抽身离去.dimly made his step and left.

花,仍旧寂寞着她的寂寞.alas ,the flowers, as they always did,   would still blossom  with their lonelyness  

烟,依然黯殇着他的黯殇.and the smoke still would fume  silently as ever before.

就这样

尘埃落定.

一切归零.just like this ,

everything slips by

as nothing has happened 。


最后由 溟生 于 2008-06-22 12:16:28编辑
6 Date: 2008-06-22 12:00:18