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主题:(全新改版,参赛作品)孤寂的夜--“Lonely night”

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孤寂的夜


“Lonely night”



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昏睡一夜的宁静,


Serenity through this comatose night,


自己略显迷茫。


That seemed a bit vast and hazy myself.


远处你的那份思念,


A distant missing of yours


令我思绪万千。


Made me think more.


责怪自己的任性,


Always Blame for my naughty,


可却更加无奈。


But thats actually beyond my control.


总心中有期待


The expectance hiding in my heart.


可总是觉得


Still to be imagined that,


那只是一场梦


Its a dream only.


我是怎么了


Whats become of me?


让自己早点醒来


To awake myself earlier,


还是一直很清醒


Or had always been awaken.


童话爱情真的很美


The love in fairy tale is truly wonderful,


可现实扭曲了这份爱


But the real life changed this love.


或许我不够坚定


Maybe Im not firm enough,


仍然在彷徨


still walking back and forth around the mind myself,


没有一刻停止过。


And never stop just one minute.


总是期待着….


Always expect,


会等到那一天


There will be a day,


会坚持到最后


We all sticked to the end.


听天由命


Let’s resign to our fate,


这是一直的诉愿


Its always my willing.


可能只是一种


Maybe it existed


放弃或逃避


A kind of abandon and escape.


是你不够爱我吗


Don’t you love me so much?


不,一定不是


No, must not.


只是我太脆弱


Just a weak of mine.


只是现实太残酷


As well as the ruthless in this life,


只是彼此向往不同


The differences of our yearning,


对事物的看法不同


And the attitudes towards the things.


谁都不怪


None is to blame for this.


一夜的未眠


Being awaken in this night,


虽不在一处


Although in different places.


可能感觉到


I could feel,


彼此的心跳


the heart beats of us.


你可曾听到


Have you ever heard?


我心中一直对你的呼唤


The shouting for you in my heart.


亲爱的


My love,


你一直在我的左右


You stick beside me all the way to my life……

PS:自己的小诗,也是自己爱情真实的写照,献给爱词霸两周年纪念,请大家多多支持.


(此文是经过自己重新改写后的成文!)


最后由 liuqing666 于 2007-12-05 21:13:51编辑
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学习英语是一种快乐
楼主 Date: 2007-12-05 21:00:33
呵呵
支持了
沙发 Date: 2007-12-06 09:39:45
参赛的东西,踩一踩!
好像参赛的内容应该是我与爱词霸吧.
板凳 Date: 2007-12-06 11:05:04
呵呵.我看说明上说文章的题目可以自己拟的呀?没关系了,重在参与嘛 对吧
4 Date: 2007-12-06 12:29:30
是的,没有错。重在参与。。!!
5 Date: 2007-12-06 17:02:49
MM来看你了.辛苦了.
6 Date: 2007-12-08 09:00:39


引用liuqing666于2007-12-06 12:29发表的文章:
呵呵.我看说明上说文章的题目可以自己拟的呀?没关系了,重在参与嘛 对吧

liuqing ,俺来support了
7 Date: 2007-12-08 10:04:10


引用眼睛去旅行于2007-12-08 09:00发表的文章:
MM来看你了.辛苦了.

眼睛谢谢你的支持哦,不辛苦哦,把这当作是种快乐呢 呵呵
8 Date: 2007-12-08 16:38:59


引用朴莨1018于2007-12-08 10:04发表的文章:
liuqing ,俺来support了

呵呵~感谢你到我的小窝来作客拉 感动
9 Date: 2007-12-08 16:39:56
踩一踩。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
10 Date: 2007-12-08 16:48:41
参赛编号079
11 Date: 2007-12-15 18:14:17
TO:liuqing666  参赛编号079  (英文部分)

得分:78

呵呵,词友看出来了,似乎有点偏离这个让题,但是重在参与。整体是很棒的一首小诗。我喜欢这句:只是彼此向往不同The differences of our yearning,对事物的看法不同And the attitudes towards the things.


                                 Sarah娟栀于17//20:40PM

12 Date: 2007-12-17 20:49:46

呵呵,我是有看我们参赛须知的哦。文体不限制嘛,嘿嘿,是的重在参与,今后我会多多的写出一些好一点的宝贝哦,谢谢大家的辛苦点评哦,

13 Date: 2007-12-18 14:47:33
好感动啊!
14 Date: 2008-01-11 23:03:11
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