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其实上面有一句话也是我想说的,"这是我的第三遍翻译", 我是一个害怕触及自己弱点的人,有时做不好的东西,我从没有拿出来,只是说,我不会,我没做,可实际上我也努力着,但这次,我应该战胜自己,我觉得这已经是很大的一个突破了,希望看到这篇文章的朋友,能帮我找出错误,从基础的单词拼写,到运用,我会一点点改正,也非常感谢ICIBA给我的这次机会. (正文)I join Iciba just a month when Iciba's birthday. This time I find life goal at sea,find hope in suffering .Iciba let me find a knowledge lough.A friend tell me :"Rejoicing in hope, patient in tribulation". In that time I fell nothing . When I experience difficulties I remember his words. It's also the first note's name in jackaroo start off. Iciba生日这天,正是我加入一个月时间,这段时间,我一直在迷茫中寻找目标,在痛苦中寻找希望,Iciba是我学习知识的一个港湾,一个朋友曾告诉我一句话:" 在希望中欢欣,在痛苦中忍耐". 当时并不觉得什么,经历了一些之后,每次遇到困难都会想到这句话,这也是我在新手上路发的第一个帖子名. I believe , language is power . I began to study english since in gradeschool . From fail to full mark, I admire myself foretime . Because of environment and study style lead to my english poor. sometime I doubt it userful in furturn Then I study computer software program wholehearted. I delay to study english. Till one day I find my word all forgot. The simple sentence have no feeling . I wake up to lost too much. I admire Everyone's English was so good. 一直相信,语言就是力量,从小学开始学习英语,由不及格到100分,真佩服那时的自己.可是由于环境和学习方式导致,学习不会说,听力也不好,有时候会怀疑英语我以后能用得上吗?后来一心学习计算编程,英语也就一放再放,直到有一天,发现自己单词忘光了,简单的句子都没感觉了,这才意识到自己失去了很多,看着大家的英语那么棒,真是很羡慕. I know everything is pro rata. I didn't know what you pay out . I don't want to keep that state. I want to study english seriously. It's will as a part of my life and Iciba is the best friend for my goal come true. I doubt network but in Iciba's family I really feel fervor, warmth , knowledge , wisdom. I log on Iciba's website everyday. Listen song, study sentence, watch movie and send some notes. I want to make progress with Iciba. I absorb some knowledge, I hope to help other people someday. I pass the warmth to someone. Mybe It's the first time I decide to write my thinking. 我知道所有的一切是成正比的,你们付出也是我无法看到的,我不想一直这样,我要认真地将英语学好,把它当成生活的一部分,而Iciba是帮我实现目标最好的朋友.我是一个不太相信网络的人,可这个大家庭里却真实地感到了热情、温暖、知识、智慧，我每天坚持登录Iciba，听歌、学习句子、谚语、看电影，还时常发表点感悟。我要和Iciba一起进步，现在努力地吸收养分，希望未来的某一天也可以帮助他人，把我曾得到的帮助、温暖传递给别人.可能这是我第一次决定写出自己的心声. Iciba's content very abundant. Every edition deal in warmth . I think everyone is so sood . I hope to have chance to work for everyone. The road is long , life will turn abundant. Please make abundant of the heart in Iciba. Hope our's a little progress, every grow up.At last, wish everone good luck in all event . Iciba and us grow up together . Go to it! Iciba的栏目很丰富，各个版块都经营得很温馨，觉得大家真的很棒，希望我也有机会为大家出一份力，每个人的付出都会有收获，而Iciba的付出已进入每个词友的眼中，未来的路很长，生活会很丰富，请把我们的一份热情投入这里，期待我们的每一点进步，每一次成长。 Iciba伴我们成长，ＧＯ ＴＯ ＩＴ ！ 谢谢almaling 的修改,虽然知道写的不太好,自己也改不太好,但是非常感谢你的鼓励. (正文)I joined in Iciba just a month ago when Iciba’s birthday(我想表达爱词霸的生日,这样不对吗?). I felt confused ((我感到迷茫)迷茫，你想表达此词，但这短语不适合),found hope in suffering .Iciba let me find a knowledge port. A friend tell me :"Rejoicing in hope, patient in tribulation". At that time I felt nothing. When I experienced difficulties that I thought his word. It's also the first note's name in jackaroo (新手上路). Iciba生日这天,正是我加入一个月时间,这段时间,我一直在迷茫中寻找目标,在痛苦中寻找希望,Iciba是我学习知识的一个港湾,一个朋友曾告诉我一句话:" 在希望中欢欣,在痛苦中忍耐". 当时并不觉得什么,经历了一些之后,每次遇到困难都会想到这句话,这也是我在新手上路发的第一个帖子名. I believe, language is power. I began to study English since I was in grade school. From fail to full mark, I admired myself foretime. Though I study hard, but my English is poor because of environment and study style. Sometime I doubt that English is useful for me? Then I study computer software program wholehearted. I delay to study English. Till one day I found that word(单词) was forgot. I couldn’t write and speak the simply sentence. I recognized to lost too much. I admired to Everyone’s English. 一直相信,语言就是力量,从小学开始学习英语,由不及格到100分,真佩服那时的自己.可是由于环境和学习方式导致,学习不会说,听力也不好,有时候会怀疑英语我以后能用得上吗?后来一心学习计算编程,英语也就一放再放,直到有一天,发现自己单词忘光了,简单的句子都没感觉了,这才意识到自己失去了很多,看着大家的英语那么棒,真是很羡慕. I knew everything is pro rata. I didn't know what you (have) pay out . I don't want to keep up state. I want to study English seriously. It's will as a part of my life and Iciba is the best friend for my goal comes true. I doubt network, but I really feel fervor in Iciba's family, warmth, knowledge, wisdom. I log on Iciba's website everyday. I listened song and studied sentence, watched movie and sent some notes. I want to make progress with Iciba. I was absorb by knowledge, I hope to help people in future. I pass the warmth to someone. I decide to write my thinking for the first time. 我知道所有的一切是成正比的,你们付出也是我无法看到的,我不想一直这样,我要认真地将英语学好,把它当成生活的一部分,而Iciba是帮我实现目标最好的朋友.我是一个不太相信网络的人,可这个大家庭里却真实地感到了热情、温暖、知识、智慧，我每天坚持登录Iciba，听歌、学习句子、谚语、看电影，还时常发表点感悟。我要和Iciba一起进步，现在努力地吸收养分，希望未来的某一天也可以帮助他人，把我曾得到的帮助、温暖传递给别人.可能这是我第一次决定写出自己的心声. Iciba's content very abundant. Every edition deal in warmth. I think everyone is wonderful . I hoped to work for everyone. Road is long, life will turn abundant. Let’s make abundant of the heart in Iciba. Hope our progress, every grow up. At last, wish everyone good luck in all event. Iciba and us grow up together. Go to it! Iciba的栏目很丰富，各个版块都经营得很温馨，觉得大家真的很棒，希望我也有机会为大家出一份力，每个人的付出都会有收获，而Iciba的付出已进入每个词友的眼中，未来的路很长，生活会很丰富，请把我们的一份热情投入这里，期待我们的每一点进步，每一次成长。 Iciba伴我们成长，ＧＯ ＴＯ ＩＴ ！ 最后由 雨打萍 于 2007-12-24 08:31:08编辑 最后由 雨打萍 于 2007-12-24 08:32:35编辑 附件:7.jpg  |
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