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主题:[参赛] 遇·家·Iciba

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遇 · 家 · Iciba

幸庆
遇见你,家——Iciba
虽说你只是万千水中一瓢
却及好多甘露
滋润,
莹透了
上,上上回失败的心

往矣
扶倚在
涂抹有你我生活痕迹的窗台
感受那
同行的梦萦
依旧清晰
恍惚间
懂得了
家是一种幸福,眷恋
一种执著
不晓得抛弃
没有远离
太多的甘愿
留下的
满是后来的希望

Iciba ,一美之家
你用你的方式
延续了家的存在
与你同行
我能感觉
你的眼神
你的呼吸
还有你的思想
只因你的所有
牵绕了我的神经


Meeting·Home·Iciba

So lucky
to encounter you home-Iciba.
Able to compare with quantities of amrita
although you are merely one of much water
Last and earlier soul filled with failure
is moistened and gets limpid

All has past
Relying on windowsill noting some trails of our life
To sense dreams while walking together
Clear as the same
Suddenly
I understand it
that home is a kind of happiness
is reluctant to forget something
is also a kind of conscience
Never know to go away
and discard anybody
What you have done is willing
Moreover future wishes mostly are left

A pretty home -Iciba
You keep home exsiting in you own way
I can feel your expression in your eyes
your breath
and your mind as we stay together
Beacuse I am infatuated with whole of you




:集朋友之帮助,完成这一小段,但愿不会石头沉大海!!呵呵 (^ - ^)

最后由 hihi.faith 于 2007-12-14 15:05:50编辑
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