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promise never give up
everybody has dreams.i also have a dream that i will be a notable men someday,i my opinion,notable means chrisma,lerned,tolerant,obliging etc.fortunately,i have an opportunity to enjoy the second anniversary of iciba.and even luckier that i have had a chance to become a member of this big harmonious family for two months.famously,a large number of strong points could showed how much i love her.but now i only  share with you the foremost ones.
1.more motivated than ever
maybe you are beginner which feel hard to keep on learning english.or especially hunger for some good methods in practising english.maybe you are the classic person among your family and friends,classmates as well.however,iciba is a palce which the collection of talents boost our optimism in learning english, here,someone would make you feel challenging very much after you have read their articles or something else.
2.success has many friends
a friend in need is a friend indeed. when you have troubles,you could get help from iciba or some learners here,iciba create a interesting community in learning english,all the friends must be a hardworking person.they are need  surprising answers,communication and solution to improve their english,precisely there are lots of geniuses can provide the best answers to the beginner  many a time,then all those guys become your friends.
3.insist on practising
practise make a perfect,there are many exercises just like the column "everyday english",they make us feel exciting,calculated to attempt to strengthen our competitive ability.and examine ourselves .loungers would not work hard heart and soul without supervision.such type of column surely provide more wonderful judgements for us.
that's why i love iciba,it seems to me that i could have a nice journey during my learning time in such pleasant situation.i will keep on plunging ahead with all my friends and never give up.thanks iciba,thank you all-my friends.
可以有写地方错误,希望大家指点一下,谢谢
最后由 八级大头领 于 2007-12-16 00:14:25编辑
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楼主 Date: 2007-12-15 19:33:11
参赛编号085
沙发 Date: 2007-12-15 20:15:37
TO:八级大头领  参赛编号085    (英文部分)

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整体写的不错,但是老问题存在,格式问题、时态问题,如:lerned??你是想表达learnt吗?太难猜了。每日E文这专栏确实让词友喜欢!我也喜欢哈。。。。。

板凳 Date: 2007-12-17 14:14:18
thank you .you have been gave me the  best instraction of  iciba .
4 Date: 2007-12-24 11:22:14
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