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22 Date: 2008-05-16 13:30:05
                                                  My Views on Examination
As we known,most of universities judge a student's achievement with the criterion of examinaiton.This is a very common issue existed(existing) in our campus.
We have to realize that this measure will take (cause )many side effects.To start with,the pressure to past the examination will give students a(an) impression that learning from textbooks (has been greatly enough).But there exist great many knowlege (which)cannot be found in the textbooks.For another,the norm of examination to measure a student's score is imcomlete.Obviously,the examination cannot play a role (in)measureing some students' ability.More importantly,the criterion of judgement cause students (to )igore many practical knowlege that the textbooks unable to teach you.For instance,some daily skill of survival and survival philosophy such as how to fix problems, how to stand up in the society,how to add to (improve)their competitives and so on.
  From my point of view,we should value the examination while at the same time we must read widely and broaden our horizen,what's more,(we also should) update our knowlege and pay more attention in our practical skill.
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-20 20:38:24编辑
23 Date: 2008-05-16 14:03:54
Nowdays,juvenile delinquency is becaming an attactive topic to the society.and more and more people begin to think about the reasons and the ways to prevent it .
in my opinion ,there are severe(several) reasons for this question.first ,it blame for the education ,many school emphasize more on the students'
study but ignore (,while ignoring)the virtue education .losing (Without)the guide ,the students will be affected by the bad example easily.and the influence of the media plays an important role too.they admire and fellow their "heroes". the films full of violence, sex and cheating activities (,which)impress the younth so much  and give (set)the direct bad examples (so) vividly.and the family also influence the child ,there  reports (it is released by some reportes that )more question-children come from the family of vilence or the (single-)parent family.
From the analysis,we can get some solutions to prevent it .We should care about the children not only in the study but also in the usual life.By establishing a good example and giving a warm envirnment (, we)will deduce the rate of  Juvenile Delinquency in the society. and these(, which) needs every people (to be )engaged in().

最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-20 20:54:11编辑
24 Date: 2008-05-16 15:00:30
It's somewhat a general phenomenon that the examination is taken as a only scale to evalute the students' performence in the (at )school. And I don't agree with this form(it).
I think there are many aspects(ways besides the exam) to evalute a student .And the performance in the examination is (should not be the only standard for judging .....)only the standard of learning kownledge.many school emphysize more on the students'study but ingore (than on )the cultivation of other skills such as communicating ,speaking and organization etz.this attitude guide many students limit their campus life in (to)the studying in the classroom.they may attain many a A in examinations,but when they gruaduate ,they will find they are not really ready to entering (enter)the competitive society just with the excellent certificate of lessons.
so it is necessory for our school (to) lead to set (setting) eyes fowards what kind of students is really in need (needed)in the society and change (,thus changing )the over emphasization on the examination. we should cultive the students'overall abilities not only the ability in studying ().the talent in need is the talent indeed.

最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-21 13:07:54编辑
25 Date: 2008-05-16 15:43:14
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26 Date: 2008-05-16 15:51:25
exam  becoming (, as)a  way of   choosing (selecting) excellent people has a long  history ,and it used to be  the best form .in today's()education ,exam is ()widely used  to test students's achievement (performance)and ability.it holds the authority (Some entrance exam even determines )who can go on futher  education in school.so exam is very importangt to every student ,they all study hard to get a hight mark.students thinclk a  lot of exam so that they can get a high  grad but low ability.when they get in society finding hard to adapt to it (giving rise to such a fact as some student can get high score in exam while with few practical ability , which makes them feel hard to adapt to the society when they graduate one day )of course ,exam is  a  kind  of   impetus for student study ,but it does work  on students unilaterally .we also should   trian them  the ability of  practicing .exam and  practice are the same important .exam has many  disadvantages,students  get rid of it ,they usually  cheat in an exam.exam is unfair  to students,not effective to education .
we should change the format  of exam .to test students ability  allroundly ,to attent to relationship betwin theory and prictice.

最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-23 18:49:03编辑
27 Date: 2008-05-16 17:38:02
                                  Juvenile Delinquency
In my ()society , there is one universal  phenomenon that the age of people those who commit a crime tend to a lower degree .  More and more youngsters smoke in their school time and do anything they wanna without any think( much thought).  Sometimes they steal others' money and, what's more ,they get together and have a fight to another group, even someone in sometime have(has) the passion to kill the other. All these behivors betray the normal actions in our age.  And why ?
Maybe we should consider this problem in a all-around way. Firstly ,  we're entering into a new century , open , advenced ,  developed , and we have different viewpoints compared to (viewpoints different from)before . If we cannot hold a positive and active attitude  , then  we'll be pushed to  a  wrong way and in the end  do something hurt(ing) the people and harm(ing) the society.  Secondly, nowadays , the marriage is not the same like before, there are more parents (who are more likely to)choose to divorce instead of compromise , they have less responsibility and be more selfish , this (which)directly result(s) in that their children can't get the enough love from their parents and miss the  instructions his or her parents should give , so they miss their way and walk into a unreturned direction finally. Thirdly, we, now, are almost the only child in each of our family. Everyone is regarded as the prince or princess.  Our fathers make the dinner every time before we (come)back home and our mothers prepare the fruits for us before we get to the bed. All we do is to finish our homework when we (are)in high school and college and surf the internet or have a outside party  after we graduate. This situation make(s) us a lazy man and less initiative , even we all think oursevles are the ones cannot be hurted .
We can see that besides above there are many other factors to make us be a bad person. Then what we can do to improve this or change the status ?  So I suggest like (the )following :
1) keep low-pitched and don't lose our temper easily
2) hold a positive attitude and act in a active manner
3) talk with our parents more ofter and more pure-heartedness
4) make friends as many as possible and confirm all of them are virtuous persons
5) exam ourselves in a regular time and correct the shortcomings
6) learn concerned law knowledge
Perhaps more means can be put forward to improve the phenomenon ,  it's unnecessary to scare  , just do all that we can do  and () in a proper way ,  society pay more attention on (to)it . With these , I certainly believe  we can put the situation to an end meanwhile we get more warm-hearted people .
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最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-23 19:04:17编辑
28 Date: 2008-05-16 21:20:06
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29 Date: 2008-05-16 21:34:00
My views on examinations

It is known that every university judge a student by tests nowadays.
Test was quite familiar to us from (as early as ) elementary school even kindergarten to university()We have been tested thousands of tests(times including any kinds of subjects during ten plus years, we used to these.(and it seems that we had got quite used to it)
more and more people have realized that the test was not so effective. It would lead sorts of (unexpected)problems we did not expected(删)The children’s health is not as good as before (especially their eyes), they can not get into the society well, they can not handle the relationship to (with)others, and the fixed thinking mode would reduce creative thinking (,)which is most horrible because we could never stand still if we have no creative ideas in today’s globalization world.
As far as I know, though the test has a bunch of disadvantages, it still has (in spite of ) its value. In all, it provides a standard that our country can chose good one, and it gives the most people a fair opportunity to compete with for a good university.
In near future, I think the test could have a big reformation. It could not (be considered)consider as a unique aspect for us to choose a good student, and many other things like students’ morality, sports, arts, and colligate abilities could join and enrich the test ( be taken into consideration when assessing the comprehensive ablility of the students ), ( thus to make )makes the test a really effective one.
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最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 21:00:03编辑
30 Date: 2008-05-16 22:11:43
Juvenile Delinquency
Nowadays ,the problem of juvenile delinquency is getting more and more serious in China,and the age of this group children tends to be  smaller and the result of their action tends to be more horrible.Stealing,robbing and even killing(commite by the young ) are often heard(of )doing by the very young children().Though there are a lot of reasons to (for )this terrible problem,in my oppinion,the following three is the key ones:
first, nobody ,inclouding their parents ,taught them(how) to tell the right from the wrong  when they were quite young,so when they get a bit old(er) ,they don't know what should to do and what should not.Second, they don't know the meaning of the saying"no pain ,no gain",they always dream to get easy  and comfortable lives without any hard work.They think stealing and robbing are the convenient ways to realize their daydreams.Third,bad models(),they get many bad models from Tv plays or the videos on line,so they copy the actions they learnt from the medias.
What should we do when we face this terrible problem? I think ,first of all,our parents and teachers (should)not only teach our children the knowledge of the books, but also what should to do and what should not.Secondly,tell the children  to respect lives,lives are the most important things to be respected,( the children should be told to respect others at an early age, and )nobody has right to rob the others' lives no matter who he is.Thirdly,  (we should )make some chances for the young children to feel love and love others().make (, making )more chances (for them )to communicate with the others. Share the ideas instead of keeping strange ideas deep in their own minds.
I think when the juvenile know the love ,the life ,the respect and the friendship,maybe the problem will not be so serious as it is now.

最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 21:15:14编辑
31 Date: 2008-05-16 22:52:31
In china,the fraction (score of the exam) is always a level(criterion) measure to ( to measure )the student('s ablility).if someone has high fraction,he must(will be considered  to) be a good student in the eyes of the teacher and other students.even the whole society.of course,the low fraction would been hold in scorn who compared to the high one.this was a bad custom in my country.
In this custom ,(it drives )more and more childrens would (to)try their best to gain a high fraction .their would reject progress by learning in body, wisdom and morality (without the concern about the abilities in other aspects besides study) .we could not think what the society will become.In my opinion,the standard didn’t (should not )have only high fraction but it should include an healthy body,an quick head.the most important was need a devoted heart to all the people.
   
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 21:22:15编辑
32 Date: 2008-05-17 09:35:58
Juvenile Delinquency

  Xiao Ming, a fifteen years old(15-year-old) boy, was arrested for burgle. At the same time, there are many other younth were punished by the same or other reasons. We should think much of this phenomenon.
  What lead(s) these young people into making delinquencies? There are two main reasons. Firstly, the family do not pay enough  attention on (to )they children's daily life. Many parents think that what they should do for they children is (offering )enough food and money,
but that is not enough(, which is far from being enough). They should share more time with their children to talk with them.Secondly, some TV programs build (set )many bad examples for the children. Many arrested children said what they did were learned fromthe TV programs.
   It is the time we should do (did) something to avoid or reduce the jucenile deliquency. In my opion two things must be done firstly. The first one is that parents should spend more time with their children. Making the TV progams less violence is the second thing that we should do.
  Many measures are waiting to do(be done). Where there is effort, there is hope.

最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 21:26:17编辑
33 Date: 2008-05-17 10:46:20
                                 My Views  On Examinations
     As we konw,we were tested by examinations (early)from elementary school.Now it's no changed in college school.(and so are we in the college school)
      Obviously,examination can bring some side effects.The first,examination is (can )not really evaluated(evaluate someone's ability).because some students will cheat in exam,who is not good at classes.Second,it can't inspire the bad students to study hard.The last,the examination will make the students not only to ()learn something for myself,but for the classes .
       In a word,the examination have both good and bad effects.We should see it with the full view.
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 22:22:33编辑
34 Date: 2008-05-17 10:50:10

My views on Juvenile Delinquency

With the development of the sociaty , crimes take on variously . Juvenile Delinquency is a new and popouted style of crime to (in)the new era .Allegedly , Juvenile Delinquency is at a high rate in the stastics of crime . Every so often , when you (are)surfing on net , you can see some sort of new Juvenile Delinquecy . It’s terrible . We should support the government to bringing(bring) these to a hault .
      Nowadays, some youth worship money and freedom . There are several reasons for the youth goes (going)like that way .To begin with , Being bathed in entertainment is a kind of way leading the youth to commit(ting) crime . What parents now are anxious about is comperehemsible . Youths now demand for so-called fashion , and pursue what they think as right , take(ing) their wrong action for granted . Furthermore , being aggressive is another sort of way for youth to commit crime . In this era , some youth consume and throw their parents’money away , just to compare (compete)with others . It’s so kidding to do so . Thirdly , the situation the youth being in sometimes compels the youth to commit crimes . It’s horrible . We should make these never happen . And the rest .(删)
    To lower the rate of Juvennile Delinquency .The govement should take an positive plunge to give the youth a good environment for devolopment . As a civil obligation , we support the policy of the government and keep the sociaty in balance .
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 22:26:56编辑
35 Date: 2008-05-17 12:04:55

              Juvenile  Delinquency

Nowadays,juvenile delinquency remains a debating topic that compels much attention from society.This phenomenon is common  both in China and abroad.We are often surprised at their young age because even a pupil about (of)a few years old can commit crimes.And this tendency is rapidly on the rise.

Nothing happens by accident.The same goes for (so does the )juvenile delinquency.First of all, juvenile delinquency is a reflection of shortage of care and love.Nowadays,some parents engage themselves in their own occupations,during (from )which they earn much money to support the family but childrens needs are neglected(with their children being ignored ).Day by day,children have the tendency to do harm to society since they never form a conception in their mind what is exactly right or wrong.Secondly,the Internet is responsible for juvenile delinquency.There is so much information on the Internet,healthy and unhealthy.When youth(they )search the Internet,(being affected by)harmful information is unavoidable.Since they lack common sense and the ability to resist temptation,frequent contacting wicked information may corrupt their minds.This to a large extent leads to  higher rates of crimes like drug abuse,sex abuse and murder.

Seeing the fact,necessary measures should be taken immediately to prevent juvenile delinquency.Firstly,parents are the first teacher of their children,so they are supposed to spare(take)more time to accompany their children to give (,giving)them advice and necessary guidance as well as education.Secondly,more laws and regulations are required to standardlize the operation of the Internet,thus making youth get less chance of being corrupted by illegal information.In this way, I believe  that we can prevent juvenile delinquency by a large margin.


最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 22:44:32编辑
36 Date: 2008-05-17 14:48:31
              My Views on Examinations
When it comes to the people with ablity(how to evaluate a student's ability), people always associate with (think of using )one’s marks in school. Examinations seem to be the only means to judge whether a person is talented. It is common in primary schools and middle schools and it is even true (so)in a college.
In my opinion, examinations dose both good and harm to students.
Examination is the proposal of most students and it also provide a motivation to study hard .And examinations examine students and let them know what they have learnt and what they didn’t pick up. As well, teachers can know the situation about the students better.  
   Every coin has two sides.
Nowadays people always pay too much attention to marks but ignore the training of (students' practical) abilities. It is why so many college students are (actually )incapable with (in spite of )high scores. Students should possess capacity of management, expression, communication and so on after graduate(ion) from a college. Society doesn’t need one who can do nothing but repeat a lesson.
In short , examinations is necessary but should not be the most important thing in our college life.
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 22:55:38编辑
37 Date: 2008-05-17 15:40:47
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38 Date: 2008-05-17 16:20:18

Focus on Juvenile Delinquency
       A recent investigation shows an escalation upon incidence of juvenile   delinquency. More teenager(s) fall into misstep and commit crime.

      What cause(s) the incidence increasing(to increase)? And why those teenagers (who)should be the society future commit crime. Many socialist(s) want to find those reasons including society, family, personal ingredients. In my opinion the major cause is psychology problem. Teenage is the important period of psychology development, and (in  such a period) ,( the children) are easy (to be) influenced by the society and environment surround them(). If they always stand in a fiery and fluctuant society or family environment, they will easy toeasily) lose their conscience and consciousness and avert to sickness psychology that induce(s) them to be criminal gradually.
      How to resolve the problem to deduce the incidence?? In my opinion is(it is time) to build up a health society and family ethics as well as psychology assist station there (where )those juvenile persons can get therapy there.()


最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 23:06:29编辑
39 Date: 2008-05-17 17:34:10
        My Views on Examinations
   Much to our concern, these years have seen that a top student in class is honored in that he gains an excellent achivement in examination.Nevertheless,a  student in backward may have little
progress under  pressure.
     The harmfulness of the phenomenon, however, can be seen from the notions as follows. For one thing, on this occasion, students are imposed to develop their ability of dealing with exam instead of study.Moreover , students in behind will lose confidence in their study. Worst of all, it may contribute to the bad development of (one's)mentality.
So should  parents and taecher  think much of children's mark in examination,especially for those who just fail in one or two tests?Is high points equal to efficient learning method?Do the students who do well in examination really perform successfully at all aspects.The answer is no.If the  public  continue overconcerning the point in examination, student in great numbers will suffer the negative effect that examination brings.In one word, examination is an effective way to test students's acquirement in study to some degree, but (not) a standard of (set for judging )a good or bad student.



最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 23:19:38编辑
40 Date: 2008-05-17 19:10:39
My Views on Examinations
   Much to our concern, these years have seen that a top student in class is honored in that he gains a excellent achievement in examination. Nevertheless, a student in backward seems to have little progress under  pressure.
     The harmfulness of the phenomenon, however, can be seen from the notions as follows. For one thing, on this occasion, students are imposed to develop their ability of dealing with exam instead of study. Moreover , students in behind will lose confidence in their study. Worst of all, it may contribute to the bad development of mentality.
     So should  parents and teacher  think much of children's mark in examination, especially for those who just fail in one or two tests?Is high points equal to efficient learning method? Do the students who do well in examination really perform successfully at all aspects .The answer is no. If the  public  continue concerning the point in examination to excess  , student in great numbers will suffer the negative effect that examination brings. In one word, examination is a effective way to test students's  acquirement in study to some degree, but not a standard of a good or bad student.
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