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                          Juvenile Delinquency

The phenomenon of Juvenile Delinquency is on an increase （seems to be getting increasingly prominent）in the society. It is high time to pay attention to it and seek ways to eliminate this society threatening factor(it).

Firstly, it is the actuality of Juvenile Delinquency (that is )to be analyzed, we can clearly find from various medias that the ages of the criminals are becoming smaller and the means they use are becoming rougher(?) and (more )multiple.

Secondly, as for the reasons, there are several aspects in my opinion to be blame(blamed). The lacking of education aimed at the youth’s mental health comes as first,(because) the importance of education about psychological development should never be ignored. Second comes as(删) the misleading information transferred by the social medias in terms of （such as ）violent movies and magazines along with grangdom fictions. The youth are always so metally immature that (as)to be mislead(misled).

Lastly, on benefit of our society and human harmony,I call for the training and cultivation of youth’s mental health to be valued by all education departments as soon as possible, I also claim more care and love for the youth. It is never to(too) late to push the two items throughout the whole country.
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-20 21:38:20编辑
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      Juvenile  Delinquency
It's been said that nowaday there're more adolesent crimes .There're so many reports about juvenile delinquency in the newspapers and magazines.And things like this can also be seen in TV programs.Even in our daily life, we will always hear stories as refered above.
As we know,juveniles are the most unstable peoples .They can be influented by the circumstances aroud easily.What's more,nowadays many medias like movies,magazines has vice items such as violent ,crimes and so on,and these are always the most popular.So a lot of  adolecents mode （imitate）the behaviors described in the details of movies or magazines. Accordingly,more juvenile delinquency was shown.
To solve this problem and eliminate juvenile delinquency as far (much)as we can,we must creat a healthy custom(surrounding) for adolecents at first.So public medias should take the social responsbility for the informations it broadcast.Teachers and parents should also make a good examples for the children and educate the children about crimes knowledges as well.

最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 23:23:22编辑
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Juvenile  Delinquency
   It's been said that nowaday there're more adolesent crimes .There're so many reports about juvenile delinquency in the newspapers and magazines.And things like this can also be seen in TV programs.Even in our daily life, we will always hear stories as refered above.

  As we know,juveniles are the most unstable peoples .They can be influented by the circumstances aroud easily.What's more,nowadays many medias like movies,magazines has vice items such as violent ,crimes and so on,and these are always the most popular.So a lot of  adolecents mode the behaviors described in the details of movies or magazines. Accordingly,more juvenile delinquency was shown.

To solve this problem and eliminate juvenile delinquency as far as we can,we must creat a healthy custom for adolecents at first.So public medias should take the social responsbility for the informations it broadcast.Teachers and parents should also make a good examples for the children and educate the children about crimes knowledges as well.
44 楼 Date: 2008-05-17 21:19:03
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My view on Examinations


  Nowadays in China, students in collages have lots of examinations (to attend). Those examinations are very important to them that could be 70% of their finally mark of a course(?). The examinations give us a standard of the course and a basic measure scale of a student. I think it is good to have an exam.
  The exam of a course is an effective way to let the teachers know how good (well )the students work on the courses. Every course has a purpose, but it is a problem to know if the student does well in the course. In collage, there are many more people than in high school, but it is impossible for professors and the teachers to have a talk with student, so they need a way to know whether the student can pass the course or not. Exams can effectively measure a student about the course for the professors and teachers.
  Also, exam is very external. There are only right or wrong in the exam, a person such as professor or teacher cannot just judge a student with their own opinion. Nobody could be failed by a professor because (of )prejudice. It is very good for a student that they could (to)concentrate on study but not (instead of making much effort to)get good relations with professors.
  The exams also give us a standard and measure of (for) a course. As I said before, every course has a purpose and the exams are almost fair for everyone, students could know how good they did in this course and where is the weakness(what their weakness is). It helps students to reach the goals of the course in some way. In this way, the exams help students to have better foundations and better at skills.
  In conclusion, the exams give a scale of a course, help(ing) students know how good (well)they work on the course. I think it is a good way for collage to have exams.
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 23:35:23编辑
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46 楼 Date: 2008-05-18 11:41:15
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        My Views on Examinations
(in )Ancient (time), the examination has been an essential measure of student ability of the system. (Nowadays)Modern, the examination is also used in a wide range of areas, such as learning, such as (and )interviews. However, (whether)this test (should be used as a criterion for evaluating a student's ablility)used in the current system is a very controversial subject (删)is (a)very hot topic.

China's education system for the examination is very important. This has caused students in the hearts of heavy (psychological)burden. Some students can not afford (bear)some of the negative pressure to act(删). Such as suicide（and thus commit suicide）. This is worth pondering the problem. (删)
I think the test is necessary, but it only reflects the ability to visit one of the candidates. This is because a person's ability to size not only a way to use performance. Reading ability and the ability to work in many cases are very different. Therefore, I think the subject should be integrated to investigate the ability of students.
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 23:40:19编辑
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good~~~~~~
48 楼 Date: 2008-05-19 10:01:44
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你们都是很棒的，我也想写，可是我的英语水平实在不是很理想．你们一定要加油哦！
49 楼 Date: 2008-05-19 10:47:21
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哇，我也想写，可我水平不理想，我正在慢慢学习了，呵呵。
50 楼 Date: 2008-05-19 13:24:39
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51 楼 Date: 2008-05-19 13:40:45
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引用暴力的可爱于2008-05-19 13:24发表的文章:
哇，我也想写，可我水平不理想，我正在慢慢学习了，呵呵。

要尝试啊，我相信你可以 写好的
52 楼 Date: 2008-05-19 13:46:17
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53 楼 Date: 2008-05-19 15:07:34
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54 楼 Date: 2008-05-19 22:03:59
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非常支持！
55 楼 Date: 2008-05-20 10:45:55
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                                             My Views on Examinations
    In Chinese(China),from primary to high school,students always experience all kinds of examinations.   Measuring the performance use (with)the grade of examinations as (is )one of the pervasive phenomena in shcools even in colleges.  

    There is no doubt that incessant examinations in college has its negative effects.  Firstly, it is (can)not only bring pressure on students but aslo would(can) mislead them (to such a thought that )there is not other things need(ed) to do (be done )but to study .Actually,academicians should take social practice to upgrade the ability all aspects.     Secondly, most students need to face the society and participate in interviews after graduation, so it(is) necessary to upgrade the capabilites of speech ,self-recommendation and communicate with others. It is impossible (to)apply the theory to practice if students (are)always studying in books.

    In my opinion, on one aspect,examinations are the signs of progress in human civilization and the examinnation system is the product of (删) when the social structure developed to a certain stage. On the other aspect, human （should be）used to be work more hard and efficient under the appropriate pressure. So, it (the exam )can not be completely abolished the examinations. In summary, there is need various social parcticipate while appropriate examinations. (删)
最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 23:49:10编辑
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             My Views on Examinations
    From the past to the present,examination is a standard to measure （judge）good or bad students in University.
the high scores student (with high scores ) proved an outstanding  student.the low scores student (with low scores)proved a poor student.Howeven,some outstanding students may be (删)become proud of （删）and will not learn. Perhaps,some poor students feel that they are teachers or other students of dizcrimination, finally,they give up the learning （删）.and we often see this phenomenon.there can be said it that （has）certain side effects.
examination the same as (,like the )coins(,also) has two eides,in my opinion,examnation is not the only way to test students'capaity,and wa can give students more opportunities.At the same time,we can find better way to test fine.(a student's ablility)

最后由 新东方李艳华 于 2008-05-26 23:44:33编辑
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My Views on Examinations

Nowadays most of collegue and university still chose examinations to judge the students' study level and power. they will be think as good students if they can get high score in examinitions and vice versa.
but every coin has two sides. as the main measure way, examination has the bad side as well. many students will neglect to improve their other aspects,such as ability and knowledge. they pay more attention to what they are going to be tested.
in my opinion, the score is important of course,but the collegues and universities and even the whole society should focus on the quality of students more. After all our society need not only the so called"bookworm". so only in this way, the students will use what they learned to their work later.
最后由 who_belinda 于 2008-05-20 19:26:00编辑
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Juvenile Delinquency
Compared with other social problems,juvenile delinguency are seem more and more serious so that people take more attention to it.Yongsters may rob the parents’ money ,fight with the classmates in school,even hurt people in the society.In short, the numbers of juvenile delinquency have rose shartly recently.
Why do the young with growing rate choose the wrong road?As for me, the reasons are as follow.
In the first place,the most impertant factor is the rising divoce rate.The children with the single-parent are not properly tought to face the family,even they will resent theirselves so that they can easily go astray.
What’s more,they fail the final-exam at school,and hope nothing in the future because too much teacher teach them good false value that grade can determine anything. Last but not least,they are too young to recognize something right or wrong, in result they make friends with rook and are taken advantages of by them.
It’s very urgent that we take some useful measures to teach them.Parents should trust their children,and whatever happens,parents always stand by them leading to the right track gor them.More importantly,the teachers teach them the values and ways of solving problems,taling with them as their friends.So,we shall create the positive atmosphere to exert them that they are responsible to the society and for themselves.As the old saying goes,no one can help you but to yourself.
最后由 teacake 于 2008-05-20 19:54:42编辑
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My viewson examinations

    At present, almost every colleges use a text to check the students’ knowledge.According to the students’ achievements, teachers can judge them who are hardworking and who are lazy.
    So, when examinations are coming, good students may spend twice timeto study for getting higher point. But bad students may use every ways to gethigher point. For example, cheat. Some students may copy others who are beside them.Some students may recite the knowledge what will be tested tomorrow. In a word,the point of examination can’t judge the student good or not.
    In my opinion, I think it is impossible to have an examination. But teachers can’t judge students only by the examination’s point. The teachersshould make more opportunity to let the students show their ability. The pointis not everything. The teachers should judge the students by many parts.
最后由 angel_linlin 于 2008-05-20 21:18:36编辑
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    For many young people today, traditional patterns guiding relationships and transitions between family, school and work are being challenged. Lifestyle trajectories are becoming more varied and less predictable. In today's society, rapid population growth, unavailability of housing and poverty, unemployment, or disintegration of the family are some of pressures young people must deal with.At this stage, children should be adequately taken care of and be rightly monitored. Their parents and teachers particularly play very important roles in helping them set up right philosophy and sense of value. They should take problems found during the process of growing of their children seriously. Meanwhile, methods and strategies are also important.For orphans, Society also should take responsibility to teach and help them.
   nowadays,the problem of juvenile delinquency is becoming more complicated and universal. There are many social factors to prompt juvenile to commit crimes:Family, Media, Peer influence and so on.
   Juvenile is our future for country. They are just like vulnerable flowers which should be more cared for.They need our more help, more love and more care. I really wish that they would have sunny smile on faces every day.
   
最后由 风闻花香 于 2008-05-28 18:40:50编辑
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