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examinations is  measure to test sudents ' achievement , for a long time this is a good method
use  examination  ,teacher can know  students  whether  acquaint to knowledge ,so teacher can  take a  
step to cure
but this system has some  abuse ,  some students in order to get highly mark ,although  they get the pefect
score ,but they don't  attain  the  ultimate aim -to learn knowledge  i think  this is the badly  mournful thing for
examnations  system ,
i think axamnation  is a measure but not a aim ,so i will correctly  treating  the examnations  ,our motivate is
learn knowledge
最后由 cet008 于 2008-05-22 18:02:21编辑

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  My views on examinations
Nowadays,most universities through student's examinations marks to evaluate students English level  in China.Athough many of students to put forward some good ideas to change this old system in all ages.But we can see the old system is not only not to change but also  it have more spaces to live.It means more and more students will to be hurt.
I am a students so I can feel something wrong with me which hurt other students by this old system and I will let you known you what's wrong with us. Firstly,  we  learn English's knowleages will become machne-made so result in our minds becomes more and more numbness. Sceondly,we can  put down right answers in the papers though the papers is too hardy for some students, but it always make our feels disappointment are we never to use the English language to talk something with others likes we put down the answers in papers. Lastly,most students will get into have a high English marks but can't do anything in the reality society.
In the end,I will put my views on students who is always deem high English marks equal to have a high English levels.I don't thing that is right and I want to let you known as modern students we must pay attention to improve our pratical ability more than the marks.

                                              Juvenile Delinquency
    According to a recent survey conducted by the expert of Beijing University, 2 million crimes in the world are committed by the youth each year, and the number is on the increase.
    Incredible as it is, Juvenile Delinquency has become a hot issue. Different people have different opinions. A dominant idea is that the dramatic development of technology should get the blame , which brings violent games , indifferent communications and virtual life to the young people. Since the youth has less sense of self-control, they can easily imitate the virtual situation and commit various crimes. Additionally, it is said thatthe unhealthy business ethics is the cause of evil. In most people’s eyes, money is everything. Bribery is not abnormal in the modern world. It is so abused that it becomes some parts of people’s life. Apparently, it has already penetrated deep into young people’s heart. They steal, they rob, they gamble and they are in debt.

    As far as I’m considered, no government can afford to be blind to Juvenile Delinquency; ethics education is of great importance; better law enforcement is critically needed. What’s more, the family should provide a healthy environment for their children. Not only the government but also the family and the youth themselves should make efforts together to drive the evil away from our society.     

最后由 慢金油 于 2008-05-21 16:57:24编辑

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           Juvenile Delinquency
       Today,many of the youth do crimes,including theft,robbing,killing,intentionable injury an so on.To our surprise,the average age of them is getting lower and lower.The conditon is terrible.
     What are reasons for juvenile delinquency?First,more and more violence is exposed to chiledren by the media such as TV and computer games.The youth who lack sense of right and wrong simulate those actions.Second,diforcing rate is rising,bringing more one-parent families.Kids of one-parent families lack care and love and some of them become phsically unhealthy.What`s more,the youth nowdays are spoilt and are more likely to be selfish.
I sugguest our society pay more attention to juvenile delinquency.The youth should be taught how to be a person as well as how to study.

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Juvenile Delinquency
                                 
      Nowadays, there has sprung up a undesirable phenomenon that juvenile delinquency incline to increasing dramatically.Several reasons are contribute to it,frow my own perspective,the following typically explanations are able to illustrate it as clearly as daylight.
      In the first instance,it's not that juvenile commit a crime spontaneously at all,but the current environments are affect them tremendously.That's to say,the surroundings they're living in are becoming violence.Furthermore,as a host of people acknowledge,that parents have less time to supervise them,the most bad influence of which is they lose self-discipline.Last but not least,the harmful behaviors from their classmats or friends are affect them quickingly.
      As far as I'm concerned,for one thing,our government must take effective measures to combat juvenile delinquency,there's no doubt they should control over the public security.For another,needless to say,juvenlie themself without parent's supervise have to develop self-discipline in and healthy life value attitue toward life,and keep away from those are addict in violence.By putting above into practice,juvenile delinquency cases surely dropping ceaselessly.

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Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your essay on the outline below:
1）大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩，
2）考生可能带来的副作用，
3）我对考试的看法。

My Views on Examinations
I dare to say that no students like the tests or exams. Yet it is neccessary for them to take it as an evaluation of their studies. Therefore,  from the past to present time, all the schools and colleges even the parents consider  the student's  grades are the criterion of their studies. I don't deny the exam's contributions in our life. First, it proves either the teacher or student how much they have learned, where do the students need to improve.  Second, it serves as a stimulation for our study; since everyone tends to competite with others, and no one wants to be dropped behind.   Third, exams strenghen our memory and prehension, it 's a good way for study.   
But there are also some side affects for the students. In order to get a good grade, students are so nerves about the exams which really give them a lot of pressure. Look at the junior high school students, exams are their own life. Some students usually performs well at school, but once they are attending the significant exams, they are completely at a loss. This is why some students commit suicide due to the failing of the exam.  On the other hand,  the contents of the exams seems only for the grades or scores, they are not so much useful when one enter's their career fields.
Therefore, I personally think that the exam is not the only criterion of their studies. Maybe, we need to change some system of college entrance exam or other degree's exams by adding some percentage of integrate performance or presentation, instead of those written exams.  Thus, the students might well develop their potentials without pressure. And if they can develop wholistically and practically, especially something benefit to their future work, such us how to deal with people, their moral ,emotional, psychological, and skillful development are very important, not only intellectual tests.

                                          My Views On Examinations
  Nowdays,all of the college has use examination results to

measure the students who good or bad.this way can check

the students studies in daily,supervise and urge the

students study.
   There is no denying that every thing has one more face

and use examination results to measure the students who

good or bad are no exception.Because this way lead to the

students only pay attention to the grade's and neglect their

ability. Not for a long time,  the student will didn't use their

minds to create and think. They will became "write machine".
    As far as I am concerned, examinations is only a test,

whatever you grade's high or lower.As long as you hard

working, you can call yourself a good student.

最后由 宝贝微微 于 2008-05-22 21:25:42编辑

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the topic Juvenile Delinquency. You should write at least 150 words and base your essay on the outline below:
1）青少年犯罪的现状，
2）这个问题的原因，
3）我的建议。
Juvenile Delinquency
When I see this topic, I feel my heart is bleeding.Because my brother has been  put into the jail since he was 20 years old. Off course, he has had become an adult at that age. But I still would like say that the Juvenile Delinquency phenomenon is very common nowadays. And I know this is a psychological problems at this age. Adolescence is the transition period for the teenagers both physically and psychologically. They are full of energy and have a lot of their dreams in the future. At the same times, they want to be noticed, they want to be fanciful, to be special among others. They think that they are mature enough to do what they like. Therefore, they don't listen to their parents, and would rather to gave they gangs. They consider if one can do something opposite to the norms, to the commmunity, even to the society, he would become the hero. Many of the teenages rebel their families and schools but they are faithful to their "gangs".   The consequeces are  Juvenile Delinquency in the society. Facing this problem, we, parents or teachers , even the tutors in the jail,should be patient and kind to them, to accompany them even to be with them. It means to be their friends,let them feel security in us. When we win their trust, and it will be the time to transform them.   

juvenile delinquency

Nowadays ,we can not ignore the fact that juvenile delinquency become growing serious.A survey shown that crime by young people is rising and the category of crime become varied.
There are several reasons behind this phenomenon. In the frist instance  ,most young people at the age of puberty are impulsive and impatient.They are easily influenced by others and make a mistake inadvertently.Furthermore,the family education should be mentioned.Many parents coddle their child excessively is the latent reason for the crime.Last but not the least,the social environment influence  the young people by osmosis.Lots of them lose themselves and take to the crime.
In view of the seriousness of this problem,effective measure should be taken before things get worse.On the one hand, should pay more attention to the moral education and family education.On the other  hand,the government should trying to create a sound environment which make it possible for the young people grown healthy.
最后由 流离的琉璃~ 于 2008-05-23 11:22:41编辑

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Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your essay on the outline below:
1）大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩，
2）考生可能带来的副作用，
3）我对考试的看法。

                                  My views on examinations

     when the  exam coming on,every students is worried about the their subject.   
     almost university is use the examination to scale students  what they learn in this year,at that time students was scare and choosed some ideas to make themself can pass the exam,at the same time ,the exam give student many bad affect,for example they will sent the messige to other people to find the answer,or watch student beside with themself .this way just  let them heater study and isn't student well.

therefore in my opinions,examination is important but not only one way ,mark isn't represent everything,if university can use other way s to check student's mark,i think it will have more people like to study and we will see the sunshine university.
最后由 我的爱，随你永不离开 于 2008-05-22 22:17:33编辑

examination  is  only  for  joking  in   china , i  will  not  talk   about it  any  more,   there are  a lot of   student  can  not   find  a  job  after   passing  the   cet  4   even  6.
最后由 fenshanxiaoxue 于 2008-05-23 11:21:14编辑

我没有那么历害呀

My View Examinations

Now days，more and more college for checking students is good and bad,usually use of Examinations the balance a student the study level
In fact，exam of most students come around speak，reply him the development have more disadvantage，
The first,many college students of could at graduate take diploma,at full spit study book go up knowledge,
he thought about book very useful,accordingly overlook pratical things;second,many college school education method and concept is very drop behind,think about student so as examinations good,score high,namely excellence person;third,many students at school term,lack pratice operate,result graduate after,not find works,appearance high socre low ability situation.
  therefore in my opinions,examination is important but not only one way ,mark isn't represent everything,if university can use other way s to check student's mark, I hope all college students at the school term could more practice traning technology,overpass practice check books knowledge.
最后由 中央电视台英语国际频道 于 2008-05-23 22:35:45编辑

My Views on Examinations
Everyone know that students must to be have a exam . however the
test is important or  not important.  In china students like taking a exam. Because in the college we take the exam to understand our kinds of courses level .
  In my college ,we have a lot of exam to take . It can understand myself really
and improve our level. Some of the students in order to prevent their parents know and made some very bad things, such as cheating and revision of examination results, and so are some more serious examination results because students will not ideal and on the wrong road.
  So we must have a correct attitude towards the examination.