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My Views on Examinations
Everyone know that students must to be have a exam . however the
test is important or  not important.  In china students like taking a exam. Because in the college we take the exam to understand our kinds of courses level .
  In my college ,we have a lot of exam to take . It can understand myself really
and improve our level. Some of the students in order to prevent their parents know and made some very bad things, such as cheating and revision of examination results, and so are some more serious examination results because students will not ideal and on the wrong road.
  So we must have a correct attitude towards the examination.

my view on examination
Maybe,some people think that like all things of the world have two sides,a student good or bad just judge from examination also have two aspects.one group think the high acdamic grade can represent a good student while the low grade juest represent a bad student.the other group think some of the good qualities of one people cannot only judge from exminations.
In my aponion,I am agree with the second group.I think examination just a standard of learning knowadge,but another qulities as charicteristic we couldn't known from the grade.I belive there are many people have the same experience like me.when a low grade person become your friend, always their behavior are very good and they also can help you not only in study but in your life.so how can I juedge a person only from acdamic grade.
I hope that  you should give more chances for a person maybe he or she is the best properition man for you.
最后由 rubyli7139 于 2008-05-24 18:04:26编辑

Juvenile Delinquency

Crimes are serious problems nowadays. One sort of crime particularly worries people is Juvenile Delinquenby-that is, crimes committed by young people. For some years, this kind of crime is increasing. There are mainly tow kinds: stealing and violence                                             
There are , i think , two important reasons. These crimes are not usually committed by people who are poor or in need. Young people cften dislike  and resent the adult world. They will do things to show that they are rebels. Another cause worth mentioning is that childen are exposed to films and reports about crime and violence.
The best way i can think of to solve this social problem is to teach people to love and enjoy life. I think the young people who committed crime are the result of lacking of love from their parents, friends and the society. I belive in the power of love, and even the hardest heart would melt expoesd to love.
最后由 卡tina 于 2008-05-24 22:47:30编辑

Juvenile Delinquency
Nowadays  more and more news about juvenile delinquency is reported on TV ,radio and newspapers and other medias which inspires us to think about the reason .
There are different kinds of crime about juvenile delinquency.For instance,violence ,pilfer and so on .First of all ,we consider that  circumstance surroundings him attribute to the criminal as well as his background of educaation.Generally speaking ,a  man who is well-educated seems less being incolved in such a crime .Most of the crime is regarded as not only the personal or family problem but also the whole society to some extent.Meanwhile in order to reduce this kind of crime ,both parents and society should pay more attention to juvenile's daily life to lead them into a healthy growing places.
We should appeal to every citizens  to contribute to build harmonious society.

最后由 queen_victoria 于 2008-05-25 12:17:59编辑

                My Views on Examinations
No one like to take examination?
Not exactly right,for somebody who did good in exam,would like this way.But most of us students concerns the other facet.Maybe the reasons are like the following:
   firstly,it make more students' time to prepare the exam so that they can not do things they interested.
  secondly,to some students,they have poor memories but do good in other things.However,to pass the exam,they have to cheat.
  thirdly, it may guide the children a wrong way to the performence,they will think that the score is the most important thing ,so they only study the knowledge in books,but ignore other things,such as practise and learning the out-of-book knowledge.
At this moment,examination is still the major way to judge a student who is good or not.Not only in china ,but in the western countries.In my opinion, now that it can be existence for so many years,it must has its advantage.Indeed,it can more or less judge a students' present situation and attitude to study.So,I think maybe we can improve the examination system so that it can for more students.

My Views on Examinations

It’s been widely accepted that universities gauge undergraduates’ academic performance through examinations, which, despitethe heated disputes over whether examinations do give expression to students’ knowledge or skills they acquire, without doubt will remain unchanged in the foreseeable future.

The fact that such a practice is here to stay has given rise to some downsides, given that there is an increasing tendency, particularly in recent years, among students to blindly chase after high scores while overlooking the genuine nature of examination. Consequently,universities tend to churn out a host of students who, regardless of their outstanding academic records, do not satisfy the requirements of their employers upon their graduation.

That said, I would propose that necessary reforms be carried out in a bid to minimize or, if possible, offset the negative influences generated through the current educational examination system.
最后由 konanku 于 2008-05-25 02:07:57编辑

Juvenile Delinquency

The status quo of juvenile delinquency in ourage has heightened concerns among mass media, politicians as well as the general public, due largely to the profound and far-reaching influence juvenile delinquency inflicts on our society. It is simply horrible to see that there is a plethora of youngsters in juvenile detention center who have committed a rich array of crimes.

A multitude of factors contribute to youth crime. Some people claim that causes of youth crime hinge upon the individual offender, rather than on the external environment. Opponents counter that it is the cultural and socio-economic environment to which the youth have been exposed that lead to youth crime. Both perspectives shed some light on the truth.

To combat juvenile delinquency, I would like to suggest nationwide campaigns that guide young people in the right direction during this momentous juncture of their life and educate them of the specific consequences they would face if crimes are committed.
最后由 konanku 于 2008-05-25 02:09:46编辑

my view on examination
Examination is an important way to test students in univistities and the majority of us think it is reasonable all the time.However,it also causes many problems today , at the same time many people begin to suspect it's function.For example,some  think examinations
just refect parts of students' ablity and many students may feel they are unuseful if they get a bad score and they may lose their confidence. some other think that examinations give  students  too much pressure to study normally.
As to myself,examination is still a choice for us until we find some better methods.

My views on examinations
  Nowadays, as a college student ,you will should attend  many examinations  in china,which has became common phenomena,because the examination is considered as the most important way to estimate student.
   In the university,the students  who hope themselves can gain the high score in the examination are busy in studying every day.Because of  the examination,they ignore many things,on the hand the students  make cheats in the examination,on the other hand they  do less exercise in the daily life.At the same time,everyone interest also is different,some students are forced to study.
   In  conclusion,maybe the examination is overestimated,we should take calculated measures to examine students, give more free time to students and let the students more likely exert thenselves ability.        

                                                                                       Juvenile Delinquency
In the decades as the developing of our country's morden building,the juvenile delinquency has became more and more serious.
     We can see some young guys under the age of 20,or even younger,hurt or kill someone other,sometimes even their parents were murdered usually.Sometimes,on the newspaper says that some 17 years old boy rubble a shop for money to spend on computer games.We might couldn't imagin how all these happen in such a civilazition society.
     What leads these happened?In my oppion,the education schools and famlis give tothe children should take the duty.The reason why the youth taken these actions always due to their home education they recieved.Some youth with single-parents,some with double-parents but neither of them be along with them,or some parents don't ever take care of what their kids doing outside.So,to sovle this problem,more home education is needed,certainly,conncted with schools'.

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My View on Examinations

       Examinations has been part of university education in all ages.Most colleges scales students with the grade of examinations.But after careful observation,we can detect that maybe the rule is not suitable now.
       Personally,I think this question should be probed in depth.On the one hand,students should go through some examination to prove his study is useful and meaningful.On the other hand,because examinations are so  important that some students begin to study for examination.They has ignore the mean of study.
      My own opinion is that examination, we have to not only change the form of examations but stage manay special examinations,It's so tedious that students can't show their ability.We should understand  the purpose of study.

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My View on Examination
     Nowaday examination takes as the main ruler to measure one person's ability. If you want to enter one new comany, you have to pass the coexamination  from the company. there is also exmination If you want to promote. Let alone the examination in school, students almost deal with examination  everyday. If the students obtain a good score, they are supposed to be the smart ones and to be treated better than the others  by the teachers.
the examination is a good means to test if  someone master the knowlege well or is qualified for the job, however it bring some side effects in the society. In schools, due to the examination, students face up  heavy pressure, even result in some psychological problem.  The job-seeker lost thier cofidence after several failure in job interviewing.
In my wiew, examination can use to test someone's ability in some field, but it can't stand everything. As the survey shows that some people who got good records at college are found at odds with the world when they enter the society,  they dont know how to deal with the personal relationship. Therefore, examination can only adopt to measure the knowledge in books, however, we shoul have more orpportunity to learn how to apply what we studied  in our work . The society need the talents who can utility their knowlege in actural life.

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