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My view on examination
Examination likes your friend acommpany with you in your school time.somes like it,some hate it.
if you or not want it ,it can give you answer that you are study hard or not. Some study always treat in the exam,because there affraid  fail in it .Some time i will do ,i know that is wrong but i can't contorl myself.I want to have a high score and let my parents happy,that is simply.
i think china'education have some wrong .if you in the school you must face the cruel truth ,you score decide yourself . it make many student treat in the exam.
in my memory ,every exam i fail .i don't know why.
under the china's situation the examination will contining  several decades.
in my view .the examination'right more than wrong.

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                                   Juvenile Delinquency
Nowadays changable sociey in China ,both in urban and country ,has witnessed SHEN 7 'blasting off, election in US and most foremost, violence committed by young generation .With few explaination accounted for this by young crimers,they seem be indulged in voilence ,   with all judgement lost
  When conerning the reasons attributed to the situation ,there are some factor that should not nelgect.First and foremost ,the nucler family gounped by single parent,which tend to pay much less attention to its fellow members ,should be blamed most.30% children raised by single parent has violented  law   in 2007,released by China statictis institution .what's more ,the predice to them by majority in society makes the situation worse and worse. The childeren raised by single parent suffer a lot in  their childhood and mistaken for someone deems to be a crimer is punished into cornor.Under this situation, they have few choice but to committe crime.
  As far as I am concered ,stict law and regulation should be legitimated to stop the trend of youth crime and more affection for they we should have them.They are one member in our society and they are forced  by their unfair fate. A little more care and refresh recognition would give them more chance to break from the sick fate.Only in this way will  they  be merrcied and could we have a harmorious society.

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